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My new website - opinions please

Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 10:31 pm
by Bubble
Well after waiting for around 10 years :roll: for my dear brother to sort out our previously crap and embarrasingly lame website, I commissioned my youngest son Adam (Squeak to those that know him) to make me one, which he did in just a few days from scratch :notworthy:

I asked for something that was uncomplicated and easy to read. There are a couple of things that I want to change and I want to add some images, but please let me know what you think?

http://www.motacar.com/index.html

Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 10:35 pm
by duncan
Geoff

Very impressed :D

Having spent the last 6 years as a web developer/designer that is not a bad website at all.

The only thing I would say could be improved to make it better on the eyes would be the clarity of the images on the logo and phone number and a slight distortion of the logos in the left side.

Apart from that, very good :thumb:

Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 10:35 pm
by Stuart
Very good overall, well done Adam 8)

A few grammatical things but how anal do you want to get?

Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 10:42 pm
by Bubble
dynamix wrote:Geoff

Very impressed :D

Having spent the last 6 years as a web developer/designer that is not a bad website at all.

The only thing I would say could be improved to make it better on the eyes would be the clarity of the images on the logo and phone number and a slight distortion of the logos in the left side.

Apart from that, very good :thumb:
Yes I have already said to Adam about the clarity of the images and it must have fallen on deaf ears :wink:

I have noticed one or two gramatical errors too Stu, but they will soon be corrected :)

Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 12:10 am
by Ben
Yeh - will repeat what Stu and Dunk have said, otherwise fine and dandy

Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 12:19 am
by RX7
Yeah I agree also, looks very good and very professional !!

Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 12:29 am
by Nik
Ditto to the above. At least Squeek is useful for something :D:D

Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 11:32 am
by Miniwilliams
looks good mate, very clean and pro looking.

Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 1:52 pm
by ian
very good and like the others said really

your not that far from where i live...could be handy

Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 2:55 pm
by Lloyd@JRD
Good stuff Bubble, very impressive for first time out. Just similar points as above, other than that, tip top :-D