My new website - opinions please

Bubble · Post by **Bubble** » Sat Feb 24, 2007 10:31 pm

Well after waiting for around 10 years :roll: for my dear brother to sort out our previously crap and embarrasingly lame website, I commissioned my youngest son Adam (Squeak to those that know him) to make me one, which he did in just a few days from scratch :notworthy:

I asked for something that was uncomplicated and easy to read. There are a couple of things that I want to change and I want to add some images, but please let me know what you think?

http://www.motacar.com/index.html

duncan · Post by **duncan** » Sat Feb 24, 2007 10:35 pm

Geoff

Very impressed

Having spent the last 6 years as a web developer/designer that is not a bad website at all.

The only thing I would say could be improved to make it better on the eyes would be the clarity of the images on the logo and phone number and a slight distortion of the logos in the left side.

Apart from that, very good :thumb:

Post by **Stuart** » Sat Feb 24, 2007 10:35 pm

Very good overall, well done Adam 8)

A few grammatical things but how anal do you want to get?

Bubble · Post by **Bubble** » Sat Feb 24, 2007 10:42 pm

dynamix wrote:Geoff

Very impressed

Having spent the last 6 years as a web developer/designer that is not a bad website at all.

The only thing I would say could be improved to make it better on the eyes would be the clarity of the images on the logo and phone number and a slight distortion of the logos in the left side.

Apart from that, very good :thumb:

Yes I have already said to Adam about the clarity of the images and it must have fallen on deaf ears

I have noticed one or two gramatical errors too Stu, but they will soon be corrected

Post by **Ben** » Sun Feb 25, 2007 12:10 am

Yeh - will repeat what Stu and Dunk have said, otherwise fine and dandy

RX7 · Post by **RX7** » Sun Feb 25, 2007 12:19 am

Yeah I agree also, looks very good and very professional !!

Nik · Post by **Nik** » Sun Feb 25, 2007 12:29 am

Ditto to the above. At least Squeek is useful for something

:D

Miniwilliams · Post by **Miniwilliams** » Sun Feb 25, 2007 11:32 am

looks good mate, very clean and pro looking.

ian · Post by **ian** » Sun Feb 25, 2007 1:52 pm

very good and like the others said really

your not that far from where i live...could be handy

Lloyd@JRD · Post by **Lloyd@JRD** » Sun Feb 25, 2007 2:55 pm

Good stuff Bubble, very impressive for first time out. Just similar points as above, other than that, tip top :-D